My Last...

by Katrina Boblina   Jul 15, 2005


Finally I am dead
to you cruel world.
I cannot take the pain
You've driven onto me.
I'm not saying its your fault...
even though it is,
but goodbye once again
you're just going to have to see.
I don't deserve to live
when all I do
is dream of death.
so finally It's over
I can't take it anymore
thank you for helping me
say goodbye to this world.
This will finally be,
my last poem,
my last thought...
my last breath.
This will finally be
the last you will hear of me.

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  • 18 years ago

    by [п]єєснап*томι

    After reading a couple of your poems im starting to think your suicidal... hope you don't try anything though.. this is a really good poem by the way

  • 19 years ago

    by Jamie

    Really good the only thing i can say in effort to critique is with poems that don't rhyme i think a better vocab is required....maybe try improving on that....thesaurus's (sp?) are very useful tools for writing poetry

  • 19 years ago

    by **Just Her**

    Deffintely a good poem. short and to the point.... somewhere tho it was lacking emotion. you must continue to dig deeper inside yourself to create the best poems you can possibly write

  • 19 years ago

    by nikki

    I luv this poem soooo much i can relate to alot of it great job dont stop writting ok well 5/5 again great job

  • 19 years ago

    by StormyWeather

    that has such a powerful message, and i'm not gonna ask if its true. I'm just gonna say that whatever the reason for you writing this, its very emotional and beautiful- in a dark sorta way. keep writing, and stay strong

    abbi x

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