this is a good poem...but dont commit suicide...talk to someone suicide isnt the answer i swear it will get better if you just let it....e-mail me at lilcory6280@hotmail.com

I can relate you have talent hun If you need to talk my sn is the same for everything I have msn ,aim and my email is under yahoo
(hugs)
Natalie

as to your Q about the poem I wrote called my freshman year that did all happen

thx for the comment!

Natalie

wow this is so sad... dont do it cause things always get better no matter what you think at the time.. they could always be worse... take care and keep your head up

i certainly hope is not da alts poem it was great thnx 4 da comment

sad, but strong message within.. i lykd the way u put it 2gether.. from me a 4
keep it up
nouna

I don't know how true it is...if you're really thinking about doing something....but beautifully written....the short lines work well and very powerful. PM me if you ever want to talk. Take care. (oh, and I think I'm going to skip the poem with "cutter" in the title and maybe the vampire one...but your others are definitely great work)

xxx

that has such a powerful message, and i'm not gonna ask if its true. I'm just gonna say that whatever the reason for you writing this, its very emotional and beautiful- in a dark sorta way. keep writing, and stay strong

abbi x

I luv this poem soooo much i can relate to alot of it great job dont stop writting ok well 5/5 again great job

Deffintely a good poem. short and to the point.... somewhere tho it was lacking emotion. you must continue to dig deeper inside yourself to create the best poems you can possibly write

Really good the only thing i can say in effort to critique is with poems that don't rhyme i think a better vocab is required....maybe try improving on that....thesaurus's (sp?) are very useful tools for writing poetry

After reading a couple of your poems im starting to think your suicidal... hope you don't try anything though.. this is a really good poem by the way