A friends suicide

by Marcy   Jul 16, 2005


When you came to school I noticed a tear in you're eye
I came up to you and said "whats wrong"
You replied with "nothing, don't worry"
The day was over and we said our goodbyes
Morning came and we met at the park like we usually do
You had a knife in one hand and a note in the other
And right then and there you killed you're self right in front of me
You fell to the ground
The hand with the note in it lay across you're chest
I picked it up and it said
" Dear my dearest friend
Don't worry and please don't cry. This is how it was supposed to be. I just couldn't take the pain anymore. So please don't cry over me and please be strong. I'll always be watching over you, I'll be in you're dreams, and I'll always be with you."
I fell to the ground crying
The tears falling on you and in your puddle of blood
The ambulance came and took you away
But I had that note in my hand
And I placed it over my heart
And forever in my heart you shall stay

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i know it's not really good but please rate and comment

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  • 19 years ago

    by Poncho Pandapants

    Hey thanks. Yeah I've been with my guy for about 5 monthes. Thanks for commenting on my poems. I love this line "And forever in my heart you shall stay" Beautiful 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Cynthia--Nasr

    m sorry if this is wut happened .. its too sad!!:S

  • 19 years ago

    by ¤N£$$¤

    hey it was a good poem a lil sad but it was good!

  • 19 years ago

    by Baby B

    I really like specially cuz a friend of mine is going through some hard things.. I dont know how anyone would ever live after seeing their friend die. I really hope this wasn't true. but very good job. check out some of mine.. like innocent child.. its a good one.

  • 19 years ago

    by Marcy

    ThankS for all you're comments. It isn't true but it is one of the best i have ever written so thanks for you're comments