by erikka baby Jul 16, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Anyone can be a father |
by Spitfire
That was awesome |
awww.. nice poem.. i kno exactly how u feel :( |
Venting are we? Any ways not bad. Rhyme is slightly forced sounding. Written for folks with parent trouble i take. Try putting it into a story next time. |
by katie!
I can relate to this poem a lot, maybe thats why it really stuck out to me as the best so far |
by Britney
Hey erikka, yet another amzing poem.. u cease to amze me! anyways this one was awesome too.. i really liked the ending though.. it was the perfect way to end the poem 5/5! |