Well written, I just have to say I hate/loathe/despise the word moping...

It shouldn't be in slang poems - In my opinion...

Good topic to write about though... Keep it up...

-Lyd

P.S Thankyou for the comment on mine!

umm...i changed it to whining, is that better?

Very nice...not my fave, but good job. ;)

xxx