The Roses & The Violets

by Ehsi   Jul 16, 2005


Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
They are slowly dieing
Because of you,

The roses are bleeding
& the violets are pleading
They both cry silently
while taking a beating

Unseen the roses suffer,
Unheard the violets cry,
In agony they both linger,
In loneliness they slowly die,

So the roses are black,
& the violets are dead,
Now there trapt helplessly,
In the flower bed

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  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    From what has become a cliche you have drawn something original and insightful. Well written and expressed, though clear and rich in it's imagery it can also be a powerful metaphor, well done.
    Best Wishes,
    *VioletRaven*

  • 19 years ago

    by Ehsi

    Thank you very much.
    Much Love,
    a Nøbødy & a Nimrød

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*~ Broken Green Eyes ~*~

    Beautifuly writen... i love it... keep up the awesome work..

    Kelsi

  • 19 years ago

    by Ehsi

    Thank You, Renee, Take Care.

    Thanks, Faith Of The Fallen, Take Care.

  • 19 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Wicked awesome. The way you were able to take the old rose/violet thing and completely change it around was cool.
    ~Faith of the Fallen

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