by Joyce Duboise Jul 16, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
So young,so in love |
by Atomic
I like the formation of the poem, and I appreciated the twist in the end. =) |
by emily
thanx for the comments you gave me earlier, your very good at poetry so keep at it. |
by Kurt
That was great. I can sense the feeling. And by reading it it makes me think about what how much that sounds like how i love my gf. Excellent writing. KEEP IT UP! |