That was great. I can sense the feeling. And by reading it it makes me think about what how much that sounds like how i love my gf. Excellent writing. KEEP IT UP!

thanx for the comments you gave me earlier, your very good at poetry so keep at it.

I like the formation of the poem, and I appreciated the twist in the end. =)

5/5

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