Wow I don't know what to say this is a creative well worded love poem! I really loved the 3rd stanza!
This one line from stanza 2 "The sky sofly sighs, I love you so much too" there is something about it that I think takes away from the flow and I just can't pin point it. Hey maybe it's just me! Anyways, you did an amazing job your poetry gets better with every poem I read. It was nice to read a love poem different from the norm. Keep it up! ~Brooke~

I re-read this forget what I said about stanza 2 It was the way I read it the first time! Sorry!

This is another amazing poem, was it the one u wanted me to read? lol sry if it wasnt.. but it was really nice :)