Suicide (My Goodbye)

by xXxDarkPrincessLozxXx   Jul 16, 2005


I walk towards my bedroom,
Razorblade in my palm,
Even though I'm nervous,
On the outside I appear quite calm.

I tack a note to my door,
Than I lay down in my bed,
I drag the razor across my wrist,
Finally resting my head.

The note is quite simple,
Its just a plain goodbye,
To all my friends and family,
Explaining to them why.

I was sick of having to pretend,
That my life was really good,
Sure it had its moments,
But that was in my childhood.

Now I'm a young teenager,
With some bad things in my mind,
And now as I lay here in my blood,
I know I'm leaving it all behind.

Suicide the solution,
Its just a part of I,
Suicide is my answer,
Suicides my goodbye.

~The ending was really crap, but I was running out of inspiration!!!~

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  • 19 years ago

    by ☆Vintage Butterfly Star☆

    WOW That was really good... it read really well... what are you on about ?! The end was good 2 !!
    I understand where you're coming from but sooner or later things will get better..... i hope.......
    XxX Charli XxX ~*~

  • 19 years ago

    by why me

    hey that was good write back or email me at twistedsoul29@yahoo.com or if u have yahoo im me well bye

  • 19 years ago

    by stephyG

    hey!! great work i really liked this poem! mwAz.. keep on wriTting u aRE so talentEd! StephY :):)

  • 19 years ago

    by Broke&Lost

    5/5 I liked this poem. Great!!
    Keep it up and sometimes that does seem like the answer.
    Jenn.

  • 19 years ago

    by x~broken~angel~x

    that...is...so....damn....GOOD!!!!! i love it!!!! thats like one of the best poems ive read!!!! i love it! but you better not do it! because if u do, u know im gonna do the same!!! luv u so much xxx.

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