I think it looks like a death note to me, nice try, keep writing.

Hey this is a REALLY amazing poem, i especially like the last bit

So don't forget to slit your wrists,
And give them one last kiss,
A kiss goodbye,
A kiss to finish the lie.

that's my favourite bit in this poem, which, by the way, kicks some ass ;)

xXx

Nice...sounds...well I don't know how to explain what that meant to me but I thought it was nice.
"A kiss goodbye,
A kiss to finish the lie."
Great lines...very great lines....
~The Unforgiven