Being alone ©

thanx you are too!!!!
luv RaNdOmGaL xxx

i understand the comment you are making, but i dnt think my poem is a bit over the top, that was the first poem i ever wrote so yeh it isn't perfect, but its not really over the top because its only a poem, and tht is how i feel and tht is wat people say to me, and tht is how people act towards me, but ok i guess what your saying is only your opinion.
go and read my other peoms i have put on here, and tell me if u think they are any better!!
luv RaNdOmGaL xxx

Hmm, could do with a bit of work but I think that will come with experience. I understand the message which you are trying to portray in this but I think it's a bit over the top - subtlety is sometimes a very effective tool. Anyway, overall this is pretty average but I can see huge potential in your writing. Plz keep it up and I look forward to reading more of your work. Take care,
xXxForesakenxXx

Love it...its sad how people ignore others cries for help, because they are so consumed in themselves and don't care about other people.