All I can say is WOW! Extremely creative and nicely written. 5/5. Great job.

well done! this is wot im going through as well! i really like the use of the whole flower thing hey! luv it..check my poems out plz

wow. great job! i really like it!
blessings
courtie

wow this is good. the cliffhanger meter at the end - it really leaves the audience feeling 'filled' with the 'empty' empathy that one is likely to feel.

hats off to you ... keep writing.

5/5