My pain

by Emma   Jul 17, 2005


My pain is cutting.
my pain is the laughing.
my pain is what you say.
my pain is the love i seek.
my pain is what i never find.
my pain is my dream i will never reach.
my pain is people judging me.
do i share the pain of you.

please read and comment. i try hard to write thing that have meaning to me. so i hope they have meaning to you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by A Heart Losing Hope

    Meaning is what poetry is good for i thinks, nicely done, good work =) good meaning

  • 18 years ago

    by *~vixen~*

    So truthful, 5/5. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    The only thing I would suggest is making your i's upper case *a pet peeve sorry* otherwise this was excellent, sad but true to life.

  • 18 years ago

    by BECLiKEW0AHH

    Excellent.. It was short but said alot! I love the repetition! Great work, keep it up!
    bec xx

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    I feel this way sometimes, unfortunatley. great job. 5/5.

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