o my god i like so understand and i like the part were u said the past is real part of one of my fav songs well if u have a yahoo im me at twistedsoul29@yahoo.com c ya

u got off at a gr8 start, but i din reli lyk the ending.. u shudve used better words to make it look surprising..
anywayz, i reli enjoyd the poem.. it had emotion..
great goin
nouna

yeh totally understand. take care x x x