This is really interesting. It's a different style of writing that I haven't seen a lot of but I do like it. It's a good subject too. Not your best, but still good.
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wow...i dunno if im insane or what but i thought it was great...5/5 from me
~lindsey

Its definatly different all right. Your detail is uncanny, very in depth, but worth the praise. I liked it a lot, well done.

It's a bit sickening. It made me gag...lol KIDDING!

I'm not sure what you're trying to say...I mean do you like having nothing filling your mind? No worries? I don't know. Help me out. Or maybe what other think is nothing is NORMAL to you? I wish you could just talk right back to me.

To the idiot who smiply said "I don't like it" I must say you don't like because you didn't understand it. No reason to deface a poem...ASK! Dumb dumb....

Anyhoo Renee...I can say more when you talk to me..... :) Though I don't understand it...it's very descriptive and definitely dark....

mmm . .i liked rockstar better. This was kind of dark, but i liked it.
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I absolutely love it, it is so dark but its a place ive been, ive never been able to describe it that well though.

I love it because I can relate to it. It also took a lot to write it the way you did because it was better written that way. I like it :D
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It's a nothingness where,
you're forced to eat your insides.
Where you tear away at your flesh,
because it becomes to hot to wear.

The place you never run to.
Because when you're there,
you have nothing to hold on to.
Nothing, noone. not even yourself.

great stanzas these sell the poem! my favorite lines are in these ones. and your best imagery. wonderful Ideas like the hole poem!

~Breeze

good job, as most others, i can definately relate to this. take care

wow a very unique interesting poem. makes you tink.

Jacs
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very differnt.. but ur rhyming was awesome.. and.. u had a different topic to go into detail so it made me want to keep readin awesome job..!

Dark...

i don't really understand it but i'm sure if i understood it i would love it :)

anychance you could explain it to me?

lisa x)