wow, This poem is really good. why do you say it's crappy. I don't think it's crappy at all. keep up the good work.
~ItalianStallion~

I really liked it. the slow rhythmic pattern really helped me get every word in and every word had the utmost importance in this poem. great job.

That poem was so not crappy lol i liked it alot...5/5 ty 4 comment

A bit crappy?...its far from crappy i just barely went through something like that....lost my best friend in the process (my best freind i also someone i cared for so much) i love it