Wonderful poem so far.. even though ur not done with it... I liked it.. when i was reading i got so glued to the poem.. Because i didnt know what was goin to happen.. hahah thanks for sharin! 5\5

a really great poem - even though its not finished yet. i cant wait 2 read the rest of it - its ace!

wow great poem..5/5
thanks for the comment
*BECKY*

very nice my dear you make it sound as though it happened to you......or did it.....The shadow has power.....very nice expression.....Tru

Long, but it was definetely worth it. A masterpiece.

very suspenseful, i liked all the cliff-hangers like the man calling your name, not knowing who it was. excellent poem!

hey wow, great ass poem, it there was a scale to ten, you'd get a ten. i loved this poem, 5/5, thanx for commentin on my poem
harley

WiCKed awesome work i loved it
~HazE