I thought that was rather refreshing from some other works on this site good job Coozia.

Super job, loved it! I wish I could go to the la la land you described.. get away from this place for a while : )
thanks for the comment, and 5/5 from me, all the way!
xox
Robin

nice job on this one, although i must be honest when i say that the rhyming was off...some of it didn't make sense and the rhyming seemed forced in some spots...otherwise good job!

Hey, this is the girl who wrote the poem 'models and mirrors' you commented on a while back lol. your poetry is amazing!! keep writting and never stop! 10/5!