this is a wiked poem!!!! well done!!!!! 5/5!!!!!!! xxx

great poem keep it up and thanks for the comment on mine

hey, i love this poem, it realli got to me... it inspires me, i hope things work out for you xox

Whoa...
-lost for words-

That was well enough, the rhyme scheme was a little rough, but I suppose I do have the 'natural' gift to rhyme...not everyone does, I gave it a five...