i can really realte to this... the longing u have to be back with the only joy in the world... is pain !

I really hate breakups..:(
good poem :)

Great Poem, so true... We all go thorugh it, great work. Kind regards from Kane

I know how you feel, not even in a break up but when seperated by distace for a length of time... you just lie there, want to feel him again, here him breath, see his face, here his voice...thats all you want...

good poem short and sweet! nicely done!