I really hate this poem, but my friends said it was good. So...

this is a really good poem your friend was right you are a good poet

Your friend knows his/her poetry...enough to know that this is good.

Amazing, I esp. liked these lines..

"thinking of my wife,
burning, burning in my mind."

You spelled barely as "barley" a couple times...just a little spelling error...hope you don't mind me pointing these things out...

I at first thought it might be a pleasant poem...but you did a great job, again, even if you haven't had a happing ending yet.

xxx