Comments : Infection

  • 19 years ago

    by Michael

    Nah, another bad poem..

  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    *gulp*

    Not bad at all, my friend...only a couple tiny mistakes....

    "Minuets felt like hours, days felt like years,"

    Minuets ^ - a typo I believe

    "For many, you think you are just oknd plain,"

    I'm not sure, but maybe you meant "you are just ok and plain"

    I admire your rhyming skills...you manage to create vivid scenes and very meaningful poems, and your rhyming doesn't lessen the power at all...

    xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Michael

    u were correct with my spelling. I am very bad at grammer and can't spell:(. Glad u liked the poem though...

  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    I just notice those things cuz I had the strictest English teacher (ever) that imprinted billions of things in my brain, and I managed to remember a few. It's okay, you didn't have many mistakes....and everyone makes them.... (Note: grammer is spelled grammar, I've been programmed! don't mind me...) Yes I did like it.

    xxx