by gasping for air Jul 18, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
It's hot, oh yes, oh so hot, |
by Atomic
I never read anything like this before, such passion! |
'Sweet Bliss' Would also be a good name for this...and lol, I like the poem, but didn't want to know your and your boyfriend did that;) But, whether this sounds gay or what, I love sex because it shows how much you *can* love someone. (Though I've never done it, mind you.) |
by XxTeArSxX17
Nice job keep up the good work i liek the deepness of your poem 5.5 |
It is written well, and obviously you wrote about something you liked. Not the kind of thing I normally read. |
wow.... this poem is seductive! very nicely done |