I don't think its dark, but my friends were soooo freaked out when I showed them this poem. First sad poem I actually made. So...

i think your poem was excellent...one of the best i've read so far 5/5

oh my! That is dark, I'd have to say. How can you stand those nightmares? :s

Well you definitely have a talent for poetry...this was a nice lengthy poem...and you did an incredible job with the imagery...though it was pretty horrifying imagery...but wow....vivid, great rhyming, and...yeah, I'm a little freaked out.

And the meaning...that last line sums it up pretty well...such a sad conclusion....man....

xxx

And thank u Blanco! For those who don't who Blanco is... she is a dark demon (i think) that hides in my imagination, creating horrific nightmares. God, how I love her( sigh). Naturally over time, I got use to the nightmares if any1 asks...

that was an awesome poem! i like poems like that..that freak ppl out^^ whoo hoo write more!! :D

Um well I'm glad you're used to them I guess...that's why they don't seem so dark to you, but they are.

Keep writing, Michael. Don't waste the gift.

xxx

wow, i was frowning with the eye bit and felt like i should save u! lol. awesome poem. lv A, x

great poem! i like it-like it! 25/5! =)

Dude, everything we write, basically dark. Yeah, but good dark, like this, good dark!

Wow, you write wonderfully.
I liked the ending.
much love,
marjan

That was... Amazing. If i had a nightmare like that i'd be scared to death.. That was freaky as hell and beautifully written. Great. Keep it up babe. *hugs*

~Jessica

Is it, well, it doesn't happen to me...it's a nice one...amazing as always...you are fantastic...continue writing...can't wait to see more..

I loved your poem. You paint a picture so vividly in the readers mind. I gave it a 5/5!!! If you ever get the chance read my poems and tell me what you think I would love to hear your input. I was wondering if I could add you to my favorites. [I always ask the person before I add them to make sure its okay with them and everything] Well keep on writing because you have a great talent and there great to read. =)