It had a nice flow.

Interesting. By the way thank you for your comment. This poem was simply stunning for content. Not that it really seemed very good the way it was presented was nice.

hey it makes perfect sense.. at least for me.. i understand it!! i like it.. being a poet is about expressing things in different ways and this poem really does that!! good job.. bye bye EJ

it makes sense to me, i kinda feel lk some of the stuff you mentioned. hey, you write really good poems. like really. I love ur work.