Well i could relate this to myself; I'll just keep going until i burn out and finally give up trying to act happy.
Lol, probably not even what the poem is about but it was great as i got a meaning for myself out of it.

- Take care sweetie,
Luvooo heaps,
xx - Kals.

i love this poem you are a good writer and i saved you as a favorite

very interesting...it has great flow for the set up, most people have trouble have both good flow, and a uniqye form. great job.

excellent sad poem! i like it! 25/5!

you are really talented. like really impressed. lv A, x

It's certainly a very interesting read. I'm glad to see such talent and creativity from someone your age. Most 13 year olds dwell on their little romantic problems, but your maturity seems to shine through with your advice to people and now once i read your poems, them as well. Very very nice.
-A

interesting!!!
i like it, and get most of it, but is it true??
xoxo

hey!!!!!!!!!! I'M BACK! love the poem but it's so sad i had this picture in my mind the whole time and it just makes me feel so... depressed! wonderful job on it hun. sure hope things are ok though!

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

Wow that is so deep. You show your emotions clearly in this poem!