Well well, what another great one....Keep it up, and remem what i said!

I love alll urs peoms there sad but exellant.I love em Wow i cant stop reading them its amaxing.

great job keep up the good work.
~ItalianStallion~

thats really good! hope 2 see more soon

good job keep up the good work!!!!

I think you have great potential. You have skill for rhyming..you can only get better. This one was pretty good. It could have more depth and detail, but then again it's your writing. Keep it up, and be yourself...that's all anyone can ask of you.

~rolo