The Trees

by Flying Phoenix   Jul 18, 2005


Wander through the woods,
Crawl along the path
Yet leave it if you dare
For things created only in a nightmare
Can live beyond out there

Listen to the breeze
As it whistles through the trees
Yet take heed of its warning
Before the break of morning
The creatures come from the briars
From the bluebells
From the fires
To take away your happiness

Look up through the treetops
As the sun shines on the snowdrops
Watch the patterns created in the leaves
See them as they fall and die
See them as they there on the path lie
But be careful
Watch your step
Keep to the path
Do not scream or laugh
For you can be heard
The undead are listening
The ungood are watching
The creatures are there

Waiting

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  • 19 years ago

    by Strange Angel

    I AGREE WITH LUCY!!! TRULY TRULY FANTASTIC POEM!!!!!!!! (look 8 !'s). i LOVE it. it is very good, but again very very scary *runs away*. thankyou for the compliment, but i'm not a god poet, you are better than me. I just write blah. i also appreciate your 'pah.hmph.' ness. :D write more brillo pad poems like this babes...and you'll be scarier than the finger in the fire on halloween...;)

  • 19 years ago

    by Flying Phoenix

    Ok Luski, just because you have suddenly discovered me on here, doesn't mean you have to comment on everything. But saying that, no one else wants to so they are all greatly appriciated..... And I know loads of them are crap due to me writing them years ago...I'll never be as good as you or mads. Or anyone really.

  • 19 years ago

    by Fig

    WOW!!!!!!!!!! AMAZING POEM!!!!!!!!! I AM GOUNG TO TALK IN CAPITALS TO SHOW YOU HOW AMAZING IT IS!!!!!!!! I LOVE THE POEM!!!!!!!!!

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