Broken

by ღtheღcrunkღpirateღ   Jul 18, 2005


Your changing me
bending and breaking me
molding me into some one else

this isn’t what I want!
I have to break this power you have over me
and put the shattered pieces back together

hey i don't know if this was the best place for this poem =)
please rate and comment it would mean a lot to me

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  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    Thx for rating my poems and commenting them, this is a very nice poem, I enjoyed it a lot. 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Ariana

    This is good. I like short and sweet poems, but I guess this one is just short hehe

  • 19 years ago

    by Patrik

    Short but good:)

    Best wishes,
    Patrik

  • 19 years ago

    by Mal

    Short, but to the point. I liked it! Sometime poems turn out to be the best when you're in a crappy mood, so keep writing!

  • 19 years ago

    by ~!*Ashleigh*!~

    hey thanx for the comment of my friends poem !

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