wow, such emotion in such a little poems. :) 5.

i have to agree, very nice, powerful poem.

omg great work really loved it.. well done mwahz!! ur so talenteed.. please check out my newest poem "help me" n tell me wat u fink stephy :):)

Awsome poem. It holds so much powerful emotion in its few lines. Utterly captivating! -katie (LostInEternity)

Aww I Liked This One Alot Good Job 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

An okay poem...not one that i could give a 5...but a good effort anyways...

--For¤Faith--

Woah, great poem. I'm not generally into dark poetry, but this was great. :)

powerful for such a short piece. Great work, keep it up and you'll go far. God Bless,

Car

Very depressing but good
if i wer'nt a man i'de cry

p.s.
hope thats not how you feel

Short and sweet
lovely poem
nice description for such little amount of words

I've definately been in that situation. that was so strong yet so short. i liked it.

WOw. pReTtY gOOd! weLL eXpReSSed! gOOd jOb! i'M pRouD of YoU!!!

hUgzzz!!!

miCheLLe