great poem...very talented keep writing...don't ever quite..5/5

Nice poem. I know how you feel. Keep writing! Take care.

This is really outstanding. It is the most beautiful love poem I have read in a long time. You have a few technical errors but the poem is still a gem. It is well expressed, has good rhythm and flow and a pleasing rhyme scheme. This is one that will beckon me to re-read it again and again. Thank you for sharing it here.
—Lydia O