awww, that is so sad, i hope this didn't really happen, and if it did, and you want to talk to someone about it just pm me ok!!!! 5/5 for sure, and im adding you to my favourites ok!!!

Luv Always
Lucy***

thanx

I like this poem.Keep it up and keep in touch.I give you a 5.

this is soo sad, i'm sorry this is true for you, thanks for the comments on my poems, it means alot, keep your head up! and dont quit writing, its a great release and you shouldnt stop bcuz your good at it!hugs-hayley

wonderful poem I love it, I am sorry for the things that happen and I hope things will be okay be strong!

Thank you for your c/r

-Josiah

thanx 4 commentin it means a lot
:)

Great poem.

loved your poem
i'm sorry if u're really been through that
if u wanna talk or something i'm here too ^^

take care!!

. . . p i l i

Oh my gosh, this poem was so sad. I can't say that I relate, but I know people that can. The flow was awesome and the rhyming was perfect. Keep up the great work ♥

It's amazing:) I love it. And i just wanna mention the fact that our names are so close:) *hugs* Keep up the good work sweets:)

~Jessica

thanx! *hugs everyone*
wow sum1 has a name close 2 mine! COOL~! ^.^

Nice poem. It was different then what I'd expect. Thanks for your comment.
~FaithotF

Very well written, hun. Thank you for the comment and support you gave me, it truly did mean a lot. Keep your chin up...if I ever need to talk I'll make sure to let you know, as long as you do the same with me.

Megan

okies! *hugs* ill do the same

wow really good, i like ur poems actually they are all written so well, its very good and emotional

well done
xxxxxxxxx

omg this poem made me shutter how sad who could do that to you=( thx for comments on my poems I'm here if u need to talk<3
weeping wolf

okies!

Wow, it's short but it has a lot of meaning. I loved it, it's great, but it's sad. Well written poem, keep up the good job. And thanks for your comments on my poem.

Oh hun thats horrible to have to go thru all this, i like the poem, the story that lies behind it is sad, and if you ever need to talk i'm here, hugs-hayley

I can feel the emotion..