by erikka baby Jul 18, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
The perfect teenage girl |
That was amazin..u write wid so much emotion i hearts it:D:D |
by Natalie84
I love the way you put this!! Sad that there are so many people who feel this same way. I was truly trapped from beginning to end...It flowed nicely and I loved the way you didn't use the obvious rhyme but did rhyme. Excellent write!! :) |
another well written poem! i like how you're so descriptive in your writings. keep on writing and take care! |
great work!! n so true for so many kids :( but yea,.... nice poem... love the whole.. perfect girl/perfect lie thing... |
by Brokeback
Lovely poem!! |