Awesome you have a real knack for writing. I want to read more.

not as great as your other but its still excellent....it flows so nicely and i very much enjoyed reading it....

This was a very good poem, I really liked it but I think it would be more useful to people if you gave them a way out of this problem. Just a thought great read though keep it up...

Hey awesome job.. thats so sad though.. from now on im not going to tell you if you need to improve unless you do lol.. im wasting my time writing it because that was 3 awesome poems that i have read so far.. and each one was great.. there's nothing to improve on lol.. anyways great job another 5/5!

This is so true for so many people, wonderful poem, the subject is written about often but this is one poem which has portrayed the point well.. good worl

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Good poem, good theme. Very much outright, didn't really have to think to much to get what you wanted to get across

Lovely poem!!
I really like it! *5/5*

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great work!! n so true for so many kids :( but yea,.... nice poem... love the whole.. perfect girl/perfect lie thing...

*~peace and love~*

another well written poem! i like how you're so descriptive in your writings. keep on writing and take care!

I love the way you put this!! Sad that there are so many people who feel this same way. I was truly trapped from beginning to end...It flowed nicely and I loved the way you didn't use the obvious rhyme but did rhyme. Excellent write!! :)

That was amazin..u write wid so much emotion i hearts it:D:D

can u read some of mine plz*blushes*
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