I liked it and what you had to say it was a really nice peice of work!

this was my fav:

The smile I once portrayed
Is now ashes with the rest
I played pretend before
And I was always the best

Good jobz

-Josiah

Wow, I definitely loved this one. You did a great job on the imagery. I liked the whole layout. I feel like this so much right now. These were my favorite lines:

"Tears fall gently to the ground
As I burn away all the memories
The ones I held onto for so long
The illusions that I couldn’t see"

Keep up the great work. You have great talent. Keep your head up and good luck with your friend. Peace. 5/5

really good, i liked it. keep up the good work!! chow