nice poem... my room is a bit like that. all my poems and diary and stuff are hidden away, coz ppl wouldnt think of me like that.... yeah, my room is a fake room as well. but really cool poem, thanks! |
by Stacinator
I like this one. :) |
by creasy
another great poem! keep it up, and keep your head up, stay cool. take care. :) |
that was a great poem!!! i hate saying this b/cause it's probably not exactely the same but i get where you're coming from...anyways great poem!! |
i can totally relate 5/5 and keep it up !! ~you can check out my poems if you wanna... ~ |
by Samantha
I like the analogy. Great poem. |
by the middle
Great poem! really well written and relatable. |
by Broken Tears
I like it! it had a really good message that is easy to relate to. Great job on rhyming as well. And the flow was flawless! Awesome job! I'll takea look at some of your other poems! And thx for Commenting on my poem! |
by Kendall
I like the metaphor. i didnt realize how like the stuff in my room, my life is hidden until i read this poem. great write! |