reli gr8 poem.. its very nice.. i understood it more than the others. :) keep up the gud work!!
take care

Alot how I feel.. but I cna't cut anymore on my wrists.. the skin won't grow back.. Its odd, but I like the flow of the poem. The wording at times was a bit akwards but understandable, I like it ^.^

i loved it! u're a great writter!!!!

5/5

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flows really well...like it. thanks for commenting on my poem.

these are amazing5/5