I saw the title of this one and was instantly reminded of a poem I wrote, It was in fact very similar.. I like it! writing poems about darkness and horror has always been something I enjoy, I find them the best way to create a picture in someones mind, this poem showed the pictures well, I could form the images in my mind, I enjoyed it..

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i LOVE this poem. i dance, cry, and sing in the rain to forget my horrible past and to rid of my pain for a few mintues. its unbariable. but it will eventually get better. thanx for a great poem! 5/5 please read and comment my poems. thanx! you have talent, lots of it and keep it up!