You rock!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

A great first. You did an excellent job for a first. Keep up the good work.
~Fallen Disgrace

Heya hunni! for ur first poem this is fantastic!!
it releases a lot of emotions i think .....
great use of images and thoughts!!
Keep writin!!
great poem!xxx lilz xxx

Its great hunnie keep it up ur great with expression. luv ya x

Thats great fallen keep it all up thats great for the first poem hunnie x