Wonderful water

by Mark   Jul 19, 2005


Theres masses of it
But it's unevenly spread
Because of this
Many end up dead

It's vital for life
But many don't realise
It's not to be taken for granted
As important as the sunrise

Has no colour
It's just clear
But without it
We wouldn't be here

It's makes up the world
It makes up us
These are the facts
You must trust

It makes the rivers
It makes the see
It has hidden beauty
Like you and me

It makes the lakes
It's in the snow
It can even generate power
Did you know?

But as i said
It's non-existance in some places
Causes the death
Of young, pure and innocent faces

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  • 19 years ago

    by Marjan

    Hey mark, I enjoyed reading this poem. It was really beautifully written just like your other poems. you're a really great poet.

    Theres masses of it
    But it's unevenly spread
    Because of this
    Many end up dead

    It has hidden beauty
    Like you and me

    I especially loved these parts and
    the ending was really good.
    much love,
    marjan

  • 19 years ago

    by alicia

    nice I like it !!

  • 19 years ago

    by Mark

    thnx! means allot, n yeh i know, gna try to do a poem with no rhyme

  • 19 years ago

    by Mark

    have done n thnku :D

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea broken tears

    gr8 poem love it
    if u could plz read my newest poem n comment thnx

    love andrea

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