Great Poem :D Know the feeling, you start out with a thought, but as soon as you start to rhyme, the point gets lost along the way. simply because you are finding things that rhyme.. Great poem though, kind regards from kane

This poem is very heartfelt, and I can feel every word in every line, it gave me chills, excellent writing!
please chek out my newest poem "help me" stephy :):)

I liked this poem, in the fact that you talked about poerty and how everyone thinks it should rhyme and thats shit cause that isnt poetry poetry to me is just the free flowing emotion of the pen, if it rhymes there was to much thought in it. but good poem ill check out more of your stuff later