Great poem, liked how you wnet into depth with the details. Great choose of words as well :) Kind regards from kane

Wow. This was excellent...I loved it...you're a great writer O_O. I'll check out more...I wanna find that poem you wrote with French in it...I like French. =). Great work...Very creative, unique and well put together. I think it's perfect. xoxoxox <3 keep it up.

-Mortalidaga
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great poem. loved it. keep up the good writing.

wow. great poem it's different than how most people write but great job!!

Great poem and it was diffrent to but loved it!

Good jobz

-Josiah

This is very good. Beautifully written! Great job! 5/5

what can i say? i love how you write! its a very unique qriting style. beautifully done.

Hey Hey, from what I read, this poem was ur best one, it was really good. I liked your technique. And thanks for the comment on my one, I appreciate it :). Oh look, our names are so similar hehehe yay