by LostHopesCrimsonTears Jul 19, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
In a small secluded town, |
by AhmadAfaneh
WOW! nice job i know that i have a rele long way to reach this perfect level in writing. |
Great poem! I like how you used the falcon in this poem. Very creative! |
by Katie
ok u know why i havent writre ryme poems b/c i hate them and if u dont ryme and thay are still poems!!!!!! and i won a contest on a different site so there ha |
by ScarletHaze
5/5 you did a gr8 job on this an i agree with niki its gr8 how you related your feelings to the falcon. xox |
by ...:NiKi:...
that was really good! and i love how u relate ur feelings 2 the falcon, truly splendid!!! 5/5 |