hey i really like this poem its veryyyyyy good!! awesome job!!

xX-Katherine-Xx

that was really good! and i love how u relate ur feelings 2 the falcon, truly splendid!!! 5/5

5/5 you did a gr8 job on this an i agree with niki its gr8 how you related your feelings to the falcon. xox

ok u know why i havent writre ryme poems b/c i hate them and if u dont ryme and thay are still poems!!!!!! and i won a contest on a different site so there ha

Great poem! I like how you used the falcon in this poem. Very creative!

WOW! nice job i know that i have a rele long way to reach this perfect level in writing.

Plz read some of my poems n give me some comment abt how i can be like u in writing.