I dont know how to comitt suicide

by marie   Jul 19, 2005


Is this the right time?
I'm all alone
no one is hear
at home
a tear hiding behind my black bruised eyes
no one can hear my soft delicate cries
I'm hiding behind all my lies
in the corner covered in flies
mommy and daddy are gone now they said they will come home
but yet it has been ten days now and I'm still all alone
i see the bullet and i see the gun
but day after day i have tried and i don't know how to commit suicide

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  • 18 years ago

    by EllenoreShade

    Really well written, so deep... keep up the good work.

    -Dol

  • 19 years ago

    by Estefani

    Its ok it just needs more feelings into it.

  • 19 years ago

    by Lovemylove

    really sad but you wrote it well, keep it up!