that was an amazing poem, Kane. You're really talented and keep it up .. i can't wait to read more of your stuff.
Jess xox

I'm hoping that you're okay and that you just felt like writing this...lemme know! 5/5 though, nice peice! ; )

Fantastically written. Very expressive. Lovely job with the repetition. I'm hoping you don't truly feel this way...I don't think you do...

I love the poem, though it's terribly sad...

xxx

loved it. the poem was writen very well. keep writing like this. it was great. 5/5.

Brilliant!

well done!!!

Wow, theres a lot of passion in this poem, thats what i really love about your writing. Keep it up and i can see you becoming a famous writer, you are definetely different than all the other writers ive seen... better for sure... 5/5!

Ana*

wow omigod that was great. loved it. Always wanted to write a poem with that much emotion packed in...

really well done. love your style. 5/5
and guess what...ppl do care *hugs*

You have a incrdiablestyle, you tell emotion behind a story. I immensly enjoy your work and look forward to reading more.

You're wrong, a lot of people care, like you can see ;-), because this is a grand piece with its emotions showen as a picture. The metaphors are great, so keep it up ....

Lots of love
Sabine

Nice work Kane;) Hope to here about your trip in Germany as soon as your back;D Låw ju hønn

Kane :D Long time :( Didnt reseve a message from you since ages :/ and my mobile is empty for money ;/ but i`ll send to you as soon as I can :) I can see that you havent put some new words out here! Dissepointing! Well, i havent done it myself but :p hehe... Not good!
Lots of love

Speak to you soon :)
Have fun Sweety!

Kane :D Long time :( Didnt reseve a message from you since ages :/ and my mobile is empty for money ;/ but i`ll send to you as soon as I can :) I can see that you havent put some new words out here! Dissepointing! Well, i havent done it myself but :p hehe... Not good!
Lots of love

Speak to you soon :)
Have fun Sweety!