by cowgirlstar26 Jul 19, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I look to the sky, I see you fly by |
Aww that poem is so sad but full of emotion. Great job |
by LadyPearl
Nice job, could be a story too. Try to not to repeat "I" too much. Other than that, great job. |
by Jamie
I didnt completly grasp the meaning of this poem but it flowed and rhymed perfect so 5/5 |
by Emerald
Awww! I know how you feel, at least in some way. Im sorry to hear it ended like that. I like your poem a lot and I hope to hear more from you. |
Err...Your poems are good but I just never can get into love ones. Nobodys. Not even mine. so yeah. Still for a good job a 4/5 [sorry if its low.] |