Lol i really like that, i think its what a lot of people are like with a few people in them, i really liked the poem :D funny and inciteful yay!!!

Wow, Amazing and very emotional. I really liekd it. Great writtin, you have amazing talent!
Love Always Take Care
Allison

Wow, Amazing and very emotional. I really liekd it. Great writtin, you have amazing talent!
Love Always Take Care
Allison

i like this poem i mean is crazy is like everyone is controlled by someone w/out realizing it neither the controller

ooh, i like that one. i've never read anything like it before. it made me smile!

ryc: i haven't been here in AGES. lol. thanks for your comment.

:) take care

i liked the poem and its style. beautiful work. keep it up
xx
paulette

So multiple personalities! Very unique idea for a poem. I really like your creativity. Incredibly well written! Loved it! Take Care! Brooke~

This was very interesting. I would've liked it too be a little longer and more in depth. Try to use more descriptive detail. I didn't really see a distinct difference between the three, maybe you should try to make dialogue or something. that would've been cool.

But all in all, It was an awesome poem. A different prospective. I like it.

Take Care,
Renee

Wow this poem was truly unique! And thats what made it so great! It also had a great message and rhyming technique. 5/5! Lovely yet Different :-)

Hey! wow this poem was very unique! and thats what made it great! I absolutely loved the message in it and the rhythm u did a great job describing each one! 5/5 lovely yet different! :-)

omg great work really loved it.. well done mwahz!! ur so talenteed.. please check out my newest poem "help me" n tell me wat u fink stephy :):)

HAHA Admitting you have multiple personalities....something MANY will NOT do. HAHA

This is very unique...very creative idea. Everyone has different sides to them and it's very interesting to have named them...lol I love the idea though I thought you could have kept going...at any rate it’s still awesome.

Nicely done!!! ;)

very original, I can imagine that this would be difficult to write as a poem but you did an amazing job. I really enjoyed it.

very original, I can imagine that this would be difficult to write as a poem but you did an amazing job. I really enjoyed it.

cant argue with the rest.. very unique poem, new idea for one.. keep it up.. reli gr8 work.. can u rub off some of ur talent on me n comment n vote on any one of my poems?? or maybe all? :P .. nah, jus wateva u can..
amazing write
take care
nouna

hey hun you have real talent!
loved the poem 5/5 keep it up!!
great poem
maybe you can check some of my poems out..

much love,
Jamie

WHOA! I'm guessing this poem was about multiple personalitys? I loved it...each and every line flowed great and you did a fantastic job with it! Keep it up!
Kind Regards,
~CHelsey~

damn that is cool
i hope you dont mind if i print it off and show sum of my friends??? cause theyd love to read it

Pretty freaking cool. I personally didn't think you needed teh last two lines of the last stanza. I liked the first two lines of it, but the last two kind of spelled out what you were getting at. I believe it was already noticeable in the poem and you didn't have to come outright and state it.

BRILLIANT POEM!...i agree, that sometimes the real us cant be found, it seems to hide behide a barrier - looking on .. we seem afraid to be who we really are...WHY?... It took me 40 years to take the courage to be who I AM(reminds me of a poem on this site called ...""I am who i am". it takes courage , i know..to be yourself...instead of what people want us to be.But when u do,your being true to urself, and will be happier,as i have found! We ALL need courage! Again, well written and 5/5!