I liked the simplicity of the poem and the rhyming scheme within it, while you keep such a intresting imagery which brought me back to the old tales i used to read as a child.

Fairy tales and lullabies indeed, i'm in one now.

good poem

very good! i love it. i love the way you wrote this poem. and it is true fairy tales and lullabies is all we want. please read and comment some on my poems please, if you want to anyways lol 5/5

Simplistic and lovely rhyming scheme, but so many inner visions presented to the reader. It brought back many memories for me personally.
Good write.

Regards,

Steve

i like it alot. its like..super true. reminds me of hanzel and grettel (ya know?) yeah. lol i think its cuz thats one of the only fairy tales that i remember (and i dont know n e laulabies) so...yeah. lol. i like it. sry i was a lil late commenting. im just kinda..yeah. ttyl!
love ya!
nancy

simple, but good...A poem one won't forget in a while...fairy tales and lullabies...shall be remembered..

It has a very fast flow, if you catch my meaning, and it words out great..

keep it up

has no real signifcance. wonderfully rhymed, one syllable words.